from a decree, i sowed in yr burning coals
Two new poems: one containing an image that will re"appear" ("occur" might be giving myself too much credit) forever in my shit (but reoccur recursively?! that would be something!) and one in which I have no idea whom I'm trying to accuse.
Is it gauche to post two poems at once? Also, is there a nifty word that means 'to see through'? Sorry for all this work! I know, lazy-puff, it's summer. Finkle me a dinkle. Go shave an asteroid.
Headlight Hollow
Sunset trawls
a hollowed head-
light, finds the
fine dust, this
loose silk
One Last Note or Two or Wet
Thunder scoots against the riffs
that eke from such a dimebag balcony.
of "first in the family to graduate x" --
not a neat forked choice, just a skylark plunge
for "volunteer jawbones on the Reception Battalion bus" :
near the shower knob, nickel hussy Mazda gurgle --)
losing sweet ass riff shit to wet strings
kinked and fried (what is it five seconds)
by a rain that you can lean from or let spread.
Is it gauche to post two poems at once? Also, is there a nifty word that means 'to see through'? Sorry for all this work! I know, lazy-puff, it's summer. Finkle me a dinkle. Go shave an asteroid.
Headlight Hollow
Sunset trawls
a hollowed head-
light, finds the
fine dust, this
loose silk
One Last Note or Two or Wet
Thunder scoots against the riffs
that eke from such a dimebag balcony.
- He plays to prove his t-shirt,
its logash logo of The Doors.
- In his family, things are assumed fucked
when you spring for the pre-slated motorcycle.
of "first in the family to graduate x" --
not a neat forked choice, just a skylark plunge
for "volunteer jawbones on the Reception Battalion bus" :
- comparing pink-tubed and cornpoke routes
against his hopalong mytholojerk,
a clank heart and that later go! crokd fingr
trigger flang scuzz thud finger but oh now just
near the shower knob, nickel hussy Mazda gurgle --)
- He has seen Val Kilmer fake peyote bolstered cum
and dreamed to jump hard from his own face,
losing sweet ass riff shit to wet strings
kinked and fried (what is it five seconds)
by a rain that you can lean from or let spread.
- He tries to keep the guitar under the roof slats
and knees the amp against his goof flesh.
7 Comments:
i think the spaces in the first poem work.
i don't think the next poem needs to look like a river or whatever.
"a clank heart and that later go! crokd fingr
trigger flang scuzz thud finger but oh now just"
i don't know what that is all about. it's like your poem develops unnecessary tourettes in the middle. i will think more about this poem and write more about this poem.
I get bored with the columnar. But you're prolly right.
I am trying new things with the tourettes area. I get bored with sentences.
Mike, do you ever run into a problem publishing your poems on your blog? I mean, the problem being that when you go to get them published online or in a brick-and-mortar journal, they check out your blog and notice, Hey, it's already been published! and decide to pass? OR: do you simply decide that the poems you publish on your blog and the ones you publish online and in print will be two different realms of existence?
I'm having a moral crisis!
Most journals don't count personal blogs as publications, Chuck. Those that do will generally notify you that they can't accept your work because it's been published elsewhere, and then you say where? and they say on yr blog, and you say oh -- would you have published it if it hadn't been on my blog? and they say no, no probably no, are you James Tate or Bob Hicock? and you say no, and they oh, okay, then, no, definitely not mr. crappy blogger poet and you cry. And cry.
Those that don't notify you of a rejection based on blog publication have pretty scummy morals, and you should eject such journals from your consideration cockpit.
chuck:
i struggle with that too. usually when i get something published i take it down from my blog and link it or something as a courtesy (though i've never been asked to do so).
i'm sure if i get something published in the new yorker it will be different. the new yorker hasn't contacted me yet, but i'm sure they're too afraid to ask me if they can publish one of my poems/stories.
(new yorker: if you're reading this, i will probably let you publish SOMETHING if you ask nice.)
mike
don't get bored with sentences. they have been instituted for a reason. how dare you go against the grain. long live sentences!
mike, i'm seriously begging you. you don't know WHAT THEY WILL DO TO YOU if you keep up with this fizz bang smoosh nonsense.
THEY ARE WATCHING AND WE MUST REMAIN VIGILANT AND KEEP USING SENTENCES WITH REAL SYNTAX NONE OF THIS IMPLIED SYNTAX NONSENSE BLARGH!!!!!!!
Yeah, linking it is always a smart move. Just go with the common sense stirfry of good graces.
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